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Post by writerscandy on Jul 23, 2006 20:00:54 GMT -5
I thought of it last night so the plot is not set in stone.
22 year old, Rana Perkins, has just caught her boyfriend of three years, Terin Jones, cheating on her. She had always had suspicions but now she sees it with her own eyes. She flees to Hawaii with her best friend, Larelle, because she is heartbroken and it was a graduation gift from her grandmother. Her and Nathan had plan to take the trip together and she was going to give him her virginity. When she arrives in Hawaii, she is easily smitten and charmed by a handsome vacationer, Javen Masterson. Javen and Rana share a few passionate nights. Nights that Rana has never forgotten.
It is a year and half later.
Terin and Rana are back together and engaged. He is now an assistant minister at his uncle's prominent church in New Orleans. It was now a month before their wedding. Life seems to be going great until Rana is introduced to Terin's first cousin, the one and only Javen Masterson. Javen happens to be the pastor's son. Only Larelle knows about Rana's past encounter with Javen. Terin still thinks that she is a virgin.
Javen and Rana hook up during his visit again and she catches him passionately kissing another woman. She goes and finally have sex with Terin. Her and Terin do get married as scheduled. Nine months later, she has a little girl, Zaria. Zaria looks just like Javen's mom. However, no one finds it odd since Javen's mom and Terin's mom are sisters. Javen comes back to claim the baby as his own. But is the baby really his?
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Post by Ms.La on Jul 24, 2006 19:17:30 GMT -5
I thought of it last night so the plot is not set in stone. 22 year old, Rana Perkins, has just caught her boyfriend of three years, Terin Jones, cheating on her. She had always had suspicions but now she sees it with her own eyes. She flees to Hawaii with her best friend, Larelle, because she is heartbroken and it was a graduation gift from her grandmother. Her and Nathan had plan to take the trip together and she was going to give him her virginity. When she arrives in Hawaii, she is easily smitten and charmed by a handsome vacationer, Javen Masterson. Javen and Rana share a few passionate nights. Nights that Rana has never forgotten. It is a year and half later. Terin and Rana are back together and engaged. He is now an assistant minister at his uncle's prominent church in New Orleans. It was now a month before their wedding. Life seems to be going great until Rana is introduced to Terin's first cousin, the one and only Javen Masterson. Javen happens to be the pastor's son. Only Larelle knows about Rana's past encounter with Javen. Terin still thinks that she is a virgin. Javen and Rana hook up during his visit again and she catches him passionately kissing another woman. She goes and finally have sex with Terin. Her and Terin do get married as scheduled. Nine months later, she has a little girl, Zaria. Zaria looks just like Javen's mom. However, no one finds it odd since Javen's mom and Terin's mom are sisters. Javen comes back to claim the baby as his own. But is the baby really his? sounds good. Now that's something I'd pay 2 read. |
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Post by writerscandy on Jul 24, 2006 21:11:52 GMT -5
I thought of it last night so the plot is not set in stone. 22 year old, Rana Perkins, has just caught her boyfriend of three years, Terin Jones, cheating on her. She had always had suspicions but now she sees it with her own eyes. She flees to Hawaii with her best friend, Larelle, because she is heartbroken and it was a graduation gift from her grandmother. Her and Nathan had plan to take the trip together and she was going to give him her virginity. When she arrives in Hawaii, she is easily smitten and charmed by a handsome vacationer, Javen Masterson. Javen and Rana share a few passionate nights. Nights that Rana has never forgotten. It is a year and half later. Terin and Rana are back together and engaged. He is now an assistant minister at his uncle's prominent church in New Orleans. It was now a month before their wedding. Life seems to be going great until Rana is introduced to Terin's first cousin, the one and only Javen Masterson. Javen happens to be the pastor's son. Only Larelle knows about Rana's past encounter with Javen. Terin still thinks that she is a virgin. Javen and Rana hook up during his visit again and she catches him passionately kissing another woman. She goes and finally have sex with Terin. Her and Terin do get married as scheduled. Nine months later, she has a little girl, Zaria. Zaria looks just like Javen's mom. However, no one finds it odd since Javen's mom and Terin's mom are sisters. Javen comes back to claim the baby as his own. But is the baby really his? sounds good. Now that's something I'd pay 2 read. Thanks it just came to me. I hope I can do a great job writing it. I am on a stand still with my other book. They are just about to get married. It was suppose to be a commitment ceremony, but he is going to talk her into going through with the marriage. |
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Post by Ms.La on Jul 24, 2006 22:14:44 GMT -5
sounds good. Now that's something I'd pay 2 read. Thanks it just came to me. I hope I can do a great job writing it. I am on a stand still with my other book. They are just about to get married. It was suppose to be a commitment ceremony, but he is going to talk her into going through with the marriage. U welcome, I know about the "just came 2 me" thing lol. Cool, your book sound crazy ma lol |
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Post by writerscandy on Jul 24, 2006 22:39:34 GMT -5
Thanks it just came to me. I hope I can do a great job writing it. I am on a stand still with my other book. They are just about to get married. It was suppose to be a commitment ceremony, but he is going to talk her into going through with the marriage. U welcome, I know about the "just came 2 me" thing lol. Cool, your book sound crazy ma lol yeah, I want to start writing it, but i need to atleast get into the second part of my other book. The stalking is just about to start. |
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Post by Ms.La on Jul 25, 2006 0:21:16 GMT -5
U welcome, I know about the "just came 2 me" thing lol. Cool, your book sound crazy ma lol yeah, I want to start writing it, but i need to atleast get into the second part of my other book. The stalking is just about to start. o0o goodie ;D |
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Post by writerscandy on Jul 25, 2006 22:42:04 GMT -5
yeah, I want to start writing it, but i need to atleast get into the second part of my other book. The stalking is just about to start. o0o goodie ;D Yeah, they are going to be married for about six weeks. She breaks up with him, because she overhears a girl saying that she had sex with him. Then she catches the girl coming out of his apartment. She is going to go out of town to get away from him and that is when she finds out she is pregnant. She decides not to tell anyone until her second trimester so no one will try to convince her to have an abortion. |
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Post by writerscandy on Jul 29, 2006 16:23:09 GMT -5
I changed it up a little. I am going to make her get pregnant in Hawaii. When she finds out, she accepts a job in Indiana and have the baby. She gives it up for adoption. No one knows about the baby accept for her co-worker. She keeps the baby for three months than decide to give it up. When Javen leaves New Orleans after her wedding, he does a background check on her and he finds out about the baby. He goes and adopts the boy. Then he comes back to claim that her newborn daughter is his child also.
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Post by Ms.La on Jul 30, 2006 1:14:07 GMT -5
I changed it up a little. I am going to make her get pregnant in Hawaii. When she finds out, she accepts a job in Indiana and have the baby. She gives it up for adoption. No one knows about the baby accept for her co-worker. She keeps the baby for three months than decide to give it up. When Javen leaves New Orleans after her wedding, he does a background check on her and he finds out about the baby. He goes and adopts the boy. Then he comes back to claim that her newborn daughter is his child also. damn gurl, it keeps sounding better and better. Have you checked out any publishing companies yet or do you have other plans? |
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Post by writerscandy on Jul 30, 2006 12:38:39 GMT -5
I changed it up a little. I am going to make her get pregnant in Hawaii. When she finds out, she accepts a job in Indiana and have the baby. She gives it up for adoption. No one knows about the baby accept for her co-worker. She keeps the baby for three months than decide to give it up. When Javen leaves New Orleans after her wedding, he does a background check on her and he finds out about the baby. He goes and adopts the boy. Then he comes back to claim that her newborn daughter is his child also. damn gurl, it keeps sounding better and better. Have you checked out any publishing companies yet or do you have other plans? No I haven't yet. I will as soon as I finish it and proof read it. |
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