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Post by Ms.La on Jul 6, 2006 1:45:31 GMT -5
Hey ya'll, again lol, here's another one of my books, and if I could get some feedback, honesty is a must though, that would be good.
Preface:
18-year-old Crystal Williams is freshly into her 1st year of college. She’s smart, can hold her own and did I mention drop dead gorgeous? Females usually hate or envy her and guys wanna get with her. She’s not conceited but she knows that it wont be difficult for her to get a man.
But all that changes once she meets Aaron Johnson, one of the best quarter backs in college and the number 1 NFL draft pick. On top of that, he’s notoriously known for being a womanizer. He’s arrogant, thinks he can and will get every girl he wants and usually isn’t wrong. The two hit it off from the moment they lay eye’s on each other.
Fast-forward six months later and Aaron is in the NFL and the two are still together. But will they remain a couple after Crystal learns all the dirty little secrets of the game? Can their relationship withstand with the enormous amount of sports groupies, the grueling schedule of an NFL player, and even worst, the wives and girlfriends of the athletes?
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Post by writerscandy on Jul 17, 2006 10:31:51 GMT -5
OH that sounds so good.
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Post by Ms.La on Jul 17, 2006 20:54:03 GMT -5
fa real? I didn't know If I should go ahead and write it or not, but I might go ahead after all
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Post by writerscandy on Jul 17, 2006 23:21:50 GMT -5
fa real? I didn't know If I should go ahead and write it or not, but I might go ahead after all yeah they have a new show coming out based on a football star girlfriend that is in medical school.
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Post by Ms.La on Jul 18, 2006 0:41:33 GMT -5
fa real? I didn't know If I should go ahead and write it or not, but I might go ahead after all yeah they have a new show coming out based on a football star girlfriend that is in medical school. Is it a black one? cause that reminds me of a episode feat. Tia Mowry on Girlfriends. Her man just got into the league and she's in college to become a doctor I think. But if it's not then coo
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Post by ashaw on Jul 18, 2006 11:48:09 GMT -5
Sounds good. Any book about sports athletes, wives and groupies is a sure top seller.
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Post by writerscandy on Jul 18, 2006 12:16:24 GMT -5
yeah they have a new show coming out based on a football star girlfriend that is in medical school. Is it a black one? cause that reminds me of a episode feat. Tia Mowry on Girlfriends. Her man just got into the league and she's in college to become a doctor I think. But if it's not then coo Yeah that's the show. They are doing a spinoff this fall.
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Post by writerscandy on Jul 18, 2006 12:17:02 GMT -5
Sounds good. Any book about sports athletes, wives and groupies is a sure top seller. especially if it is based on the truth.
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Post by Ms.La on Jul 18, 2006 17:46:04 GMT -5
Is it a black one? cause that reminds me of a episode feat. Tia Mowry on Girlfriends. Her man just got into the league and she's in college to become a doctor I think. But if it's not then coo Yeah that's the show. They are doing a spinoff this fall. Oh cool, I liked dat episode, I was hoping they would turn it into a show. I'll be watching it ;D
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